There was a God called Zeus, and his arch enemies called Hades. This all happened in rome. Zeus was attacked by Hades and Zeuses baby fell into earth and his name was called Herain.
He was grown as a human. But for real, he’s a god. When his parents told him the truth, he was amazed. He became a soldier and he married a wife called kerry II.
She got kidnapped by Hades and Herain got really mad. Hades let out a horde of disasters in the world. Herain trys to save the world, after a while, his love was killed while he was destroying Hades. Kerry II died forever.
He went to the under world, and try to get Kerry II’s spirit. When Herain got the spirit back to kerry II and he started to glow. He became a god. His wife was sad that she was gonna be alone again.
But Zeus let Kerry II become a goddess.
June 6, 2016 at 4:30 pm
This is only 160 words – you have some excellent ideas but they are underdeveloped.
You clearly have an affinity for myths and you have begun to re-tell the story of Zeus and Hades.
Write a plan to help you develop some of your ideas. Where will your description need some work to help your reader understand what is happening?